Hi Mya, My name is Rajbir. I really liked how you used the colours. But next time can you make the poster a little bigger because I find it a bit hrad to read. But aprat from that I really liked you post.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Wow! Your poster is really cool, My friend who is commenting on other schools says she thinks you should be a graphic designer. The colours are really bright and pretty with shines and highlights. The facts are excellent, and I could imagine the main one being from a magazine cover.
The photo is awesome as well, just remember to attribute the images you use from the internet by writing or hyperlinking to where you got them from for maximum points next week.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Mya, My name is Rajbir.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used the colours.
But next time can you make the poster a little bigger because I find it a bit hrad to read. But aprat from that I really liked you post.
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ReplyDeleteHey Mya,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Wow! Your poster is really cool, My friend who is commenting on other schools says she thinks you should be a graphic designer. The colours are really bright and pretty with shines and highlights. The facts are excellent, and I could imagine the main one being from a magazine cover.
The photo is awesome as well, just remember to attribute the images you use from the internet by writing or hyperlinking to where you got them from for maximum points next week.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel